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loml

The Tortured Poets Department · 2024 · Track 12
Quill · Co-written
Written byTaylor Swift, Aaron Dessner
Produced byTaylor Swift, Aaron Dessner
First PersonRomantic lossConfessional
Mash-ups & Live Pairings
  • loml / Don't You (TV) (Eras Tour, Munich)
  • loml / White Horse (Eras Tour, Miami Gardens)
Notable lyric
Who's gonna stop us from waltzing back into rekindled flamesWe embroidered the memories of the time I was awayStitching, "We were just kids, babe"…”

Written and produced by Taylor Swift and Aaron Dessner. The title L-O-M-L stands for 'love of my life' but the final line reveals the L also stands for 'loss,' making the title itself a double entendre that governs the poem's structure. Angela & Uncle Jerry argue the double meaning motif is the poem's central organizing principle, appearing in nearly every major image: legendary (great/mythic), suit and tie (wedding/funeral), low-down boy/stand-up guy (buried/upright), Holy Ghost (sacred/ghosted), cinephile (cinema-lover/sin-lover). Notably, the speaker never says 'you're the love of my life', only the man says it, making 'you're the loss of my life' the speaker's sole definitive claim. Angela and Uncle Jerry hear loml echoing Peter in its waltz and its words-from-the-mouths-of-babes turn, a shared register of childhood promise curdling into adult loss. They also note its cascading repetition as a structural cousin to the ten-minute All Too Well. Community readers tie the song to the album's prologue poem: "the ink bleeds" answers the poem's "my veins of pitch black ink", and "a con man sells a fool a get-love-quick scheme" echoes the get-love-quick figure of the Reputation-era poem "Why She Disappeared". A widely shared reading treats loml as a key to the whole record — the muse read as a fantasy of the artist's own imagination, and the song's quoted exchanges (I said, you told me) heard as a years-long conversation conducted through songs rather than in life. Readers also connect "our field of dreams" to The 1975's "All I Need to Hear", reading the field of dreams as the imagined shared world the two built across years of writing to each other — the place his lyric "where we lived all these years" points back to.

Uncle Jerry’s Verdict

95.2

Lyrical Strength
97
Narrative & Structure
98
Production & Atmosphere
94
Lore & Literary References
95
Emotional Impact
92
Total Points476